who's there I ask, in the middle of the night
A brushed hand from NatureÂ’s kiss lost in a tumult of stormy hiss. Was that you who stood there in the rain, gasping for breath as life the lightning did claim? An eerie memory surfaces once again of...
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Indigo..The images and the feeling of this is wonderful, so many lines to love! Yes..like this one very much, Sky
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saw the shadow of memory eerily pleasant and deeper than the well that holds dreams....much enjoyed....Peace"Reality starts with imagination" ---Bob shank, Aug. 2004
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a very fine piece ... could have quoted it all ! x Liz Quote:Was it you who stood there in my dreams, dancing across the moonlit beams? I think naught for a callous reverie could reveal the scars that...
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This is so softly written, beautifully brushed verses that linger long after the poem has been read. Wonderful dream thoughts shared deep in the night before the dawn breaks. Love 'n hugs, Debb...
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Indigo: Very nice........Each line was detailed with powerful flow, and left me speechless at the ending....I really enjoyed this piece.... Sunny
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"Was it you who stood there in my dreams, dancing across the moonlit beams?" Classical flow and images melding into your lines, Indigo.
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Grand question only you (and him) could answer. Amazing and very creative, Laura._________________________________________________ Musann The Fields Café de la Paix ...Read More
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Quote:Was it you who stood there between each breath, pulsating to the rushing of my beating heart as the night bids farewell to greet the day and lovers lost to windswept beaches fade away? What a...
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~Indigo~ This is hauntingly beautiful..... Quote:Was it you who stood there in my dreams, dancing across the moonlit beams? I think naught for a callous reverie could reveal the scars that might not...
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sky thanks so very much for reading and the wonderful comment! indigoWill the flood behin meput out the fire inside me? The Missing Frame - AFI "decemberunderground"
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bob, thanks! your reply is most appreciated! indigoWill the flood behin meput out the fire inside me? The Missing Frame - AFI "decemberunderground"
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lizarikk, thanks so much for enjoying this one! indigoWill the flood behin meput out the fire inside me? The Missing Frame - AFI "decemberunderground"
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Debb, many thanks to you for reading and replying! indigoWill the flood behin meput out the fire inside me? The Missing Frame - AFI "decemberunderground"
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Sunny, much thanks for the beautiful comment! indigoWill the flood behin meput out the fire inside me? The Missing Frame - AFI "decemberunderground"
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thanks so very much for reading me scorp! *hugz* indigoWill the flood behin meput out the fire inside me? The Missing Frame - AFI "decemberunderground"
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mirielle, dreams are such interesting things! they come and go with disjointed images leaving the person wondering and scratching their head! thanks so much for reading me! lauraWill the flood behin...
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brian, its wonderful when the words just flow so easily as one writes. this one was like that. thanks so much for reading and enjoying! lauraWill the flood behin meput out the fire inside me? The...
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dawn, thank you very much! for reading and the wonderful comment you've left! lauraWill the flood behin meput out the fire inside me? The Missing Frame - AFI "decemberunderground"
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